Nikki Z Lord
Posts : 83 Join date : 2013-08-25 Age : 29 Location : Florida
| Subject: Fire Empress Zaag Sun Aug 25, 2013 2:38 am | |
| Basic Character Information: Name: Nikki Zaagman Age: 18 Title: Empress Zaag Gender: Female Looks:- Nikki:
- Formal Wear:
- Combat Uniform:
The combat uniform is the same, except she keeps the helmet on a golden string tied tightly to her hip. She normally doesn't wear any makeup and trys not to over do things and keeps them low key. However when she is in formal wear she makes sure she looks as beautiful as possible. When she wears military uniform her large breast are extremely noticeable and you can tell what her gender is. Personality: Nikki is normally a calm and cool personal. She isn't one to be overprotective and angry. She is very calm cool and collected. However she does have her spikes of anger. Sometimes its even said, that she will roast a man alive for disobeying orders. She can be very angry and furious when this happens. Other then that she is very cool and not one to rush to battle. When she goes through things on a daily bases she is very abrupt and short. She has a strong anger towards regular people and thinks they are useless and shouldn't even be given life. They are pointless and 100% useless in her eyes. She understands they are needed but detest them. Rank Information: Rank: Lord/King Nation: Fire Empire Organization: N/a Bending Element: Fire/Lightining/Lava Specialty: Athlete Skill Information: Special Characteristics:- SC:
Name: Lava Flesh Nation:Fire Description: Due to her mastering Lava bending her capability to not be harmed by fire increased beyond any normal user. She can now take the heat of flames from a rank below hers. This doesn't apply to lighting, to be noted.
Name: Dragon Style Nation:Fire Description: She has done extreme training and is now capable of doing the most deadly of hand to hand combat. Using her bending movements with her hand to hand makes her a deadly person to fight. She is a master of this art and almost unbeatable in hand to hand when using this. Normally this style is brought in with her various other abilities she has.
Name: Dancing Flames (Sword Mastery) Nation:Fire Description: Due to years of brutal training with the Fire Blade, she has mastered its usage and is now capable of beating a sword master Captain in combat with the sword.
Name: Unarmed Mastery Nation: - Description: Zaag mastered the techniques of hand to hand combat, knowing all manner of disarms, grapples, and just where to place his punches and kicks to inflict the most damage
Name:Mastery of the Flame Nation: Fire Description: Zaag has mastered all three elements of the fire affinity, Fire, Lightning, and Lava. She can use each element to the highest degree and has mastered each level of each element. She has become the greatest fire manipulator that she can be and has achieved perfection when it comes to the Flame.
Name: One Handed Nation: - Description: This allows for her to mix and match her various combats. She only needs one hand to fight a master swordsman. No matter which hand she uses she will win. This makes it extremely hard for her to be bested. Not only can she swing at you using her sword style, but also fight you using her hand to hand fire combat.
Techniques:- Fire Bending:
Name: General Fire Manipulation Rank: Lord Element: Fire Range: 10-65 meters Description: From the rank of Recruit, all the way to the rank of Avatar, the abilities of a Fire bender are almost infinite. Manipulating the element of Fire is all in the mind of the bender.
Name: Flare Dance Rank: Recruit Element: Fire Range: 5 meters Description: A highly mobile form of Fire Bending, it has it's roots in the fluid motions of water bending and often contradicts the swift powerful strikes of fire bending. The user of this move will begin by creating their flames and then proceed to dance around with them. The manipulated flames can be used for further to increase the speed, accuracy or suddenness of the technique. The manipulated flames can also be used for defense by deflecting other techniques to the side with the flames. Maintaining this technique for long periods of time takes extreme skill, endurance, and patience and is often considered a significant achievement if possible to maintain over ten minutes.
Name: Flame Foot Rank: Captain - General Element: Fire Range: Own Feet Description: User emits a flame from the soles of their feet that allows them to skate around the battle at 35mph. On a general level, the user can leave the ground entirely and actually fly in the air [only 30 meters above ground level - 45mph flight]
Name: Solar Flare Rank: Soldier Element: Fire Range: Must be looking at Person Description: The user slams his fist together and releases a solar flare across the area, blinding all those looking upon his body.
Name: Hells shield Rank:Recruit-Lord Element:Fire Range:Self Description:Kanda will emit flames that will surround his body in a bubble type shape. After being emitted the flames will form themselves to kanda body and hold for three post or until destroyed. The shield can block fire and earth equal to its rank, air of one rank lower can disperse the shield, and water of two ranks lower can destroy it completely.
Name: Flight of Flames Rank:lord Element:Fire Range:Five feet wing span Description:With a thrust of his arms, a pair of flaming wings will form on his back. These wings will support his body and allow flight up to 50m high. The wings can be dispersed by air one rank lower and destroyed by water two ranks lower. The wings last ten post and allow kanda to fly at a speed of 30mph.
Name: Fire consumption Rank:Lord Element:Fire Range:- Description:Can do this to any fire lower in rank. Kanda can breath in fire, consuming it and reverting it back into energy. This can be done to any fire of any size, but can only be used every five post and only three times a topic.
Name: Smoke Screen Rank:Lord Element:Fire Range:30m Description:Kanda can take the force and energy used to create fire, and divert it else where. By focusing and pushing the force out, he can use the energy to make smoke pour out from his pores on his skin. This will create a massive smoke cloud around him, and each post will grow 10m. Air of one rank or lower can disperse the smoke.
Name: Spark spit Rank:Soldier Element:Fire Range:10m Description:Kanda can spit small sparks and ash from his mouth. It will not be fire but instead extremely hot burning sparks. These sparks can catch other things on fire and will burn flesh.
Name: Burning silhouettes Rank:General Element:Fire Range:40m Description:By pushing heat into the air, kanda can create images and shapes out of his fire. This can be from anything from a person to a small coin. It will still be burning fire and will not take on any details, but will take exact shape and form. Kanda can rearrange the shape and form at will.
Name: Descent into Darkness Rank:Lord Element:Fire Range:50m Description:Kanda will extend his hands towards the sky, and shoot flames into it for one post. Every post after that post the sky will be a dark black, and there will be a lingering heat in the air. It will be hard to see and hard to breath. All water techs will be reduced down one rank and air techs will seem heavy and hard to use at equal rank.
Name: Smoke Plume Rank: Soldier Element: Fire Range: 20 meter radius Description: The user inhales, creating a burning flame within, and then exhales a large amount of smoke into the area. This smoke is thick and blocks vision, but also makes it hard to breathe and operate in. Air techniques that are Soldier level can blow the smoke away and disperse it.
- Lightining Manipulation:
Name: General Lightning Manipulation Rank: Lord Element: Lightning Range: 10-65 meters Description: From the rank of Recruit, all the way to the rank of Avatar, the abilities of a Lightning bender are almost infinite. Manipulating the element of Lightning is all in the mind of the bender.
Name:Surge Rank:Lord Element:Lightning Range:- Description:Kanda can send surges of lightning through out his body, if he touches anything or anything touches him it will be shocked with lightning. If he touches a metal object it will stay charged for one post, shocking anyone who touches it. If shocked some one will be paralyzed and unable to do advanced movements like bending, running or attacking for one post.
Name: Redirecting Force Rank: Lord Element: Lightning Range: Oneself Description: Raizo can redirect lightning (at equal or lower rank) shot at him. He takes the lightning in from one limb and send it coursing through his body to release it out another. With his expertise, he can redirect the lightning where he sees fit.
- Lava Bending:
Name:General Lava Manipulation Rank:Lord Element:Lava Range:50m Description:Kanda had excelled in the art of lava bending, and can manipulate lava without even thinking about it, it has become second nature for him, like breathing.
Name:Harden Rank:Lord Element:Lava Range:50m Description:If a lava source is near, or any lava around him, he is capable of hardening it and returning it to its lava state. This can be used to walk on it, trick others into thinking its safe and other uses.
Name:Psychic Glob Rank:General Element:Lava Range:5m Description:Kanda can make any source of lava glob up into a small ball that is 5 feet wide. This ball can float around him and will follow him until he does other wise with it. The lava can be stored and saved for later use. Specialty skills:Name: Acrobatic Specialty: Athlete Ability: Athletes are fast, quick and extremely agile. They are good at jumping around the battle field and out running their opponents. They have increased speed and agility, making them hard to catch and keep up with. Name: Flexibility Specialty: Athlete Ability: Zaag is even more flexible than normal for Fire Nation Natives. Her bones, primarily around joints, are hard to outright break. They can still be sprained or fractured by a force that would break someone else’s bones, however, and twice the normal force is required to break them. Because of this extra flexibility, she is also capable of escaping shackles and bindings that would hold even the most slippery person. Pet/Animal:Type: Pet Name: Zazu Species: Dragon Element: Lava Appearance:- Looks:
Description: The dragon is one that shoots flames and is a almighty and powerful dragon. It listens solely to its master and worries little for anything else. Special Abilities: Fire Breath- The dragon can shooting flames, the element fires out and can light anything on fire in its path. Fire Proof- They are fire proof in general. Otherwise the damage the dragon will receive will be kinetic. Size- Due to the 30 (38 feet from tail to head) foot dragon standing tall, its durability and amount it can take is huge. Dragon Scales- The dragon scales provide defense against any weapons a enemy would use, from cannonballs to spears. Although cannonballs damage the dragon, its not enough to kill or break through skin. Its like being hit by a powerful BB gun. Flight- The dragons flight can reach speeds up to 100 mph and max out at 300 mphs. Origin:The dragons origins are unknown. At her 18th birthday it appeared before her and gave it loyalty to her. Its loyalty is to the Fire Empress or who ever is in lead of the Fire Nation. Weapons:Name: Fire Blade Appearance:- Looks:
When the swords metal is gone, the blade will keep its shape but turn into a hot molding lava. Range: 3 feet Rank:Special Abilities: Extremely strong sword, allows user to heat the blade and cut through other blades with extreme heat. This is done by the core of the blade is lava. The metal around it is thin and extremely strong. The lave inside heats up and makes the blade extremely hot. If the blade itself is chipped the lava can simply replace it. This makes the blade much more deadly. The core that allows this is built into the hilt. Origin: This sword has been passed down from Fire Lord to Fire lord. It is now in Nikki hands and will be used for doom. History History:Birth Arc At birth she was nothing more then a little baby born into a a poor family. She wasn't capable of achieving anything in life. Born into a civilian family and not expected of much is were she'd start. Her family that simply tended to cattle and farm. By the time that she was 3, she was able to make puffs of fire and her parents hadn't found out yet. As they were heavy against benders and even at such a young age she already understood in her community not to come out. Youth Arc As she was 5, she began to understand something odd about her life. She'd go through the daily bore of what they called life and laugh at the sillyness and rules imposed on them. It seemed the entire society was built on oppression of people. She keep this understand and showed her capability to no one. She didn't want to tell anyone, or anything towards her bending. She wasn't even sure if her parents were her real ones. She waited year after year until one day when she was 12. A group of solider came to town and began to search through all the kids and bulled and fought with them. They were looking through the entire country for a girl of 12. Each one of them was stood before a line and the benders would go up to each and fire a fire ball at each one. Each one would be slammed at each girl and kill them. She was in total fear, as the ball fired at her. She returned to the training she'd do in secret in the woods. As the ball came to her she'd flip it into the sky. The guards were pleased, they'd found what they wanted. Soon she was locked in strange chains and taken away. She remembers a large black hood being thrown over her head and a slam to the back. When she awoke she found a strange group of people poking and proding her. "This is her, right were you said she was. The princess here of all places. The Lord must have been very scared to send her away like that. Which squad brought her in?" a womens voice said. "Toki Death Squad." a man said. "What why were they sent?" she spoke in anger. After that she was began to be treated like a princess and heavy lesson in sued. Teen Arc At 13 she hadn't yet been told of why she was being treated like this. She missed her parents and missed her friends. She wanted to go back, but instead heavy studding and fire fighting insued. By the time she was 14, she'd already mastered the first advanced element of lighting. They were extremely impressed with her ability. After years more of this training, she began to come into her own and form her own ideas about the nation. The longer she was with them, the more they pressed running a nation. By the time she was 16, the Fire Lord died of old age. She would now be surrounded by advisers running the nation. A year later and she finished her schooling beating even the most powerful Fire User in the country. She had now mastered her second element. For the next year she'd spend her time in schooling and finishing it. She had now turned 18 and no longer the Regency Council has in control. She took control with a iron grip and installed a empire. Then changed the name from Fire Nation to the Empire of Fire. She then proceed to install many old rights and began to gear up for war. She also revoked her right from the council and stopped attending the few meeting she had gone to. She made no prepartions to fight, but prepared the nation to a military-industrial complex. This had made the Empire very uneasy with the other Nations. She now announced a new charter of rights for all men of the fire nation. She was ushering in a new stage of military enlightenment. A odd thing never tried before.
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Iris Lord
Posts : 129 Join date : 2011-05-06 Age : 39 Location : Where ever you want me...
| Subject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag Mon Aug 26, 2013 9:57 pm | |
| up the looks and personality
being a master swordsman and a master bender is no. so nerf the sword skills and what not
nerf the dragon down some. even for dragons, its OP. so edit these things and then i shall review | |
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Nikki Z Lord
Posts : 83 Join date : 2013-08-25 Age : 29 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:36 pm | |
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Iris Lord
Posts : 129 Join date : 2011-05-06 Age : 39 Location : Where ever you want me...
| Subject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag Mon Aug 26, 2013 10:38 pm | |
| mental telepathy, no
flight faster than hell, no
fire proof, make it general
the keen sense of smell is just random and doesnt seem to fit well with dragons in how they really function, so provide reasoning, or remove it | |
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Nikki Z Lord
Posts : 83 Join date : 2013-08-25 Age : 29 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag Mon Aug 26, 2013 11:03 pm | |
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Iris Lord
Posts : 129 Join date : 2011-05-06 Age : 39 Location : Where ever you want me...
| Subject: Re: Fire Empress Zaag Mon Aug 26, 2013 11:25 pm | |
| note the flames of the dragon are that of a captain
approved
enjoy dat rp | |
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